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Thirty Years (ONE SHOT)

June 18th, 2009 (09:03 pm)
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Title: Thirty Years (ONE SHOT)

Author: 2nd_toshiko.

Rating: PG-13

Characters/pairings: Jack Harkness/Ianto Jones, someone else…

Spoilers: ‘Journey’s End’ DW S4 and ‘Exit Wounds’ TW S2, ‘Cyberwoman’ TW S1.

Disclaimer: I do NOT own Doctor Who or Torchwood, nor do I own the characters, the plots or anything related to the shows. Property of Russell T Davies, TW/DW Production Team and the almighty BBC. This is made purely for entertainment purposes, and not money is being made out of it. If this fiction causes any problems, let me know, I’ll remove immediately.

 

Summary: What is Jack didn’t come back to Ianto after all the companions left the Doctor after Davros? What if Jack left something behind? What would happen thirty years later?

 

 

Author’s Notes:  Please note that this takes place after Journey’s End of Doctor Who, and relates to Exit Wounds of Torchwood (please read summary). Beta'd by my beautiful beta Just Being Me08 :)

 

 

 

 

Thirty Years…

 

Once upon a time, I knew a man called Jack Harkness. Well, I thought I kind of knew him. Never got to tell him about you.’

 

‘Why?’

 

‘I don’t think he would’ve…’

 

‘He would’ve what?’

 

‘It doesn’t matter now.’

 

‘But really-‘

 

‘Really. Please. Stop’.

 

‘Okay- fine. Carry on.’

 

‘With what?’

 

‘The story.’

 

Ianto pushed up the glasses he found he had needed in time, and moved back into his chair, as he watched the dark haired girl in front of him.

 

‘Jack Harkness was my lover. He was an extraordinary man, an amazing man…He travelled in time and space, met people beyond galaxies we could only ever dream off…’

 

‘You’re making him sound like a dream.’

 

‘Sometimes, I’m not sure if he isn’t’.

 

‘I’m here, aren’t I?’

 

‘Shut up.’

 

‘You make him sound like he was someone fantastic, someone I should admire. I can’t.’

 

Ianto blinked at the girl. ‘What?’

 

‘He left you alone, never looked back. He went back to this-this…Doctor you talk of, and he never fucking thought of you again!’

 

‘Jack had other things on his mind.’

 

‘He forgot. I admit it. I watch you everyday. You can’t live, do you know that?’

 

‘Jack wouldn’t do that to me.’

 

‘I wasn’t even there, and I can tell you, that’s exactly what he did.’

 

Silence. The girl spoke again, her face softer.

 

‘You loved him.’

 

‘No.’ The answer was definite.

 

‘You still love him.’

 

‘No.’ The answer wobbled. The girl held the broken man, broken even after the years.

 

‘This is so stupid,’ Ianto said quietly, refusing to whimper or drop a tear. ‘But he was…all I had after my parents, my sister, my….Lisa. He just dropped out of the sky and somehow, he just somehow changed everything.’

 

The girl laughed softly. ‘A real bastard.’

 

Ianto allowed himself a smile, before holding a hand on the girl’s cheek.

 

‘He is’, Ianto said. ‘’Cause now, every time I look at you, all I see is him.

 

The girl’s face turned as hard as stone, as she watched Ianto crumble away again.

 

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BANG.

 

‘What the HELL?’ Jack yelled, as debris surrounded him. ‘DOCTOR?’

 

Silence. No one there.

 

No. no….Not after everything. The Doctor can’t have gone too.

 

Not now. Not after Tosh and Owen.

 

‘Hello?’ Jack yelled out, trying to stand up, and coughing in the mess of the TARDIS. Where was the Doctor? After Davros’ attack, and with the union of the companions (as he called it). Jack hadn’t had the heart to leave the Doctor.

 

Just one visit. Just one. Ianto won’t know I’m gone.

 

BANG.

 

Jack pulled out a gun, pointing aimlessly at the unseen terror.

 

‘Who’s there?’ Jack yelled, his coat swinging. ‘Show yourself.’

 

Suddenly, a hand folded around his neck, choking him from behind.

 

‘Wha…?’ Jack managed before coughing- unable to breathe.

 

A voice came to his ears. ‘Hello…I believe we haven’t met- yet.’

 

Jack choked, spitting out in his attempt not to die. Again.

 

2 seconds later, Jack was sprawled on the floor of the damaged TARDIS, faced by a beautiful, beautiful woman.

 

In his exact replica.

 

She smiled, her long dark hair swinging at her shoulders.

 

‘Hello, daddy’, the girl said. ‘Wow, Tad was right, I do look like you.’

 

Daddy? What the….

 

Jack coughed, and tried to stand up. ‘I’m not your dad’, he croaked.

 

BANG. He was on the floor again.

 

‘Whoa’, she said again, her eyes becoming dark. ‘You’re not standing up.’

 

She stood over the immortal man, her figure and her beautiful carved face shining out in the darkness.

 

‘I can’t be…’ Jack choked out. ‘You’re ….older…’

 

She laughed, hard and bitterly.

 

Suddenly, she pulled out a gun, and pressed the hard end to his head.  ‘You never once thought, did you? You never thought to think what would become of my Tad. It’s been-

 

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‘It’s been thirty years’, Ianto continued, holding his daughter to him. ‘It’s been thirty years, but I still don’t, I can’t believe he’s truly left me.’

 

He looked at his daughter properly. ‘Jack Harkness is your father, Alice.I was pregnant with you when he...went away. I didn't even know i could get pregnant!’

 

Alice sat, still as a cat, her eyes shining with tears and anger.

 

‘I’ll find him, Tad’, she promised. ‘I’ll find him thirty years too late’.

 

 

The End.

 

What do you think? Am I completely bonkers? Please let me know!

 

Comments are smothered in chocolate and TOTALLY worshipped!

Comments

Posted by: missthingsplace ([info]missthingsplace)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:20 pm (UTC)

Nope, not bonkers ... i'm assuming Ianto was pregnant somehow?

I loved the concept.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:23 pm (UTC)
The first time i met you(doc/martha)

glad you likr the concept! and you are very fast!
im very worried about this fic, theres so much to be assumed...and yes, ianto was pregnant.
thanks for reading!

Posted by: missthingsplace ([info]missthingsplace)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:26 pm (UTC)

It was only the clarifying that Ianto was pregnant that i needed to know, the rest was all self explaintry i think ...

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:29 pm (UTC)
ianto with a GUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay, ill go back and alter the fic a bit to accomdate that bit. thanks for letting me know :D

Posted by: missthingsplace ([info]missthingsplace)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:34 pm (UTC)

I wouldn't worry, i'm sure people will realise that Ianto was pregnant, like i did.

Edited at 2009-06-18 08:34 pm (UTC)

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:41 pm (UTC)
children of the earth- jack and ianto

thanks, bit ive changed it anyways. i hope people get it anyways! :D

Posted by: naddypants ([info]naddypants)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:22 pm (UTC)

Woah! That was a very interesting premise. And it was subtle yet so emotive in all the right places.

Although it kinda makes me want to kick Jack in the gonads, even though I know it wouldn't do any good.
Poor Ianto. :( *huggles him*
And Alice sounds a bit badass. Awesome.
Well Jack better learn his lesson!

Loved (l)
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Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 08:25 pm (UTC)
searching. forever.

lol, i think, from seeing the promos, alice is gonna be kinda badass- and come on, with jacks nature, i cant imagine his daughter being anything but!

and lol, id like to kick him where it hurts too!

thanks for reading, Dr nads!

Posted by: Aimee ([info]thehubsitter)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 09:17 pm (UTC)
Jack

*Much wibbling ensues* Nooooo, how could Jack leave Ianto and not come back until he was gone.

And I love Alice, I hope she gives Jack what for, he should know the Doctor is not reliable with his timings and stop going off with him.

Not bonkers, just inspired. :) I really liked it.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 09:23 pm (UTC)
ianto with a GUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow! hello! *waves*

and lol, this one was actually one crazy plotbunny, and i just wrote it as soon as it popped to mind! im glad you liked, thank you for reading! xD

Posted by: adira_tam ([info]adira_tam)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 09:39 pm (UTC)

I liked it..I think Alice would be a badass.. but there would have to be a bit of her Tad there as well, especially as he had been a single parent..

(I had worked out that Ianto had been left pregnant)

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 09:43 pm (UTC)
jack and ianto face to face!

im guessing you read the previous comments?:P
and yes, i think alice will, especially having seen the promos...but i did also try to show a certain softness to her, that i think she would have if ianto was her tad.

(and yay! i didnt have to worry then:D though maybe i should mnetion in the header that theres mentions of mpreg. or im being paranoid)

Posted by: adira_tam ([info]adira_tam)
Posted at: June 18th, 2009 10:24 pm (UTC)

I actually did my comment, then read the others...so you did good

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:48 pm (UTC)
pic#86103408

oh okay :d yay!

Posted by: rivulet027 ([info]rivulet027)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 12:05 am (UTC)

Wow. Poor Jack, too late to set things right. Though you have to wonder if when he figures it out if he'll find a way to go back and change things.

Poor Ianto, getting left behind. You'd think Jack'd have been smart enough to take him along.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:49 pm (UTC)
jack and tosh (circa adam)

i know, jack makes mistakes and others end up paying. jack taking ianto on the tardis might have been a good idea! thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

Posted by: trektotorch ([info]trektotorch)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 12:46 am (UTC)

This was interesting. It kept my interest to the end. Good concept--would make a good expanded story. Thanks for writing it.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:51 pm (UTC)

yay! thanks for reading- i am actually thinking of doing a series to do with jacks daughter- a version of alice, but AU. this was like a test run to see how the story would go down with everyone :D

glad you like!

Posted by: thrace_adams ([info]thrace_adams)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 12:54 am (UTC)
Ianto Thrace Warning NOT SHAREABLE

*points to icon* OMG that was sad.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:52 pm (UTC)
outer space facebook! lol!

lol, i didnt actually mean it to be so sad...but you know me, ALL my fics seem to be depressing at one point! and lol--->will i always have the thrace warning? lol!

Posted by: thrace_adams ([info]thrace_adams)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)
Ianto Thrace Warning NOT SHAREABLE

Unless they have happy endings...yes :)

Posted by: Paula B ([info]mamabeast)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 01:53 am (UTC)
sp project

ohhh more pleaase!!!!!!!

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:53 pm (UTC)

this was a one shot fic- but i am thinking of writing a series on an idea based on this. i wrote this fic to see how a similar idea wopuld go down :D ill let you know if i do do the series!

thanks for reading!

Posted by: Juli ([info]jmchau)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:10 am (UTC)

yes, you're bonkers...but not in a bad way!

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:53 pm (UTC)
janto of Fragments

lol! ill take that as a compliment! being snae would be boring...:P

thanks for reading!

Posted by: seether_79 ([info]seether_79)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 05:48 am (UTC)
Torchwood: Janto;kiss & words

Whoa intense but in a good way! That was wonderfully written and a really good twist on things. Really great concept beautifully executed! If your bonkers then so am I... Solidarity sister lol

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:54 pm (UTC)
jack and ianto. Just hold me while i hea

LOL! yay! glad you liked, seether! you made my day with this comment, thank you so much! and lol...solidarity.:D

Posted by: badly_knitted ([info]badly_knitted)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 08:57 am (UTC)

Oh, you just broke my heart! Poor Ianto, left aone for 30 years! I'm sure Jack didn't really mean to. Can't he go back and try again? *wibbles*

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:55 pm (UTC)

awww *uses sticky tape to try mend badly_knitted's heart* sorrrrrrrrrrrry *hug* i know, im evil, i had ianto left alone for thirty years...and yes, jack has got a habit of doing thing
s and unintentionally hurting other people.
in our uiniverse, he could go back and try again!

Posted by: truenorth7 ([info]truenorth7)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 09:28 am (UTC)

Love this...please more soon!

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)

yay! thank you!

this is actually a one shot fic, but i am thinking of starting a series on a idea based like this one...i wrote this as a trial to see how it goes.:D

Posted by: owensheart ([info]owensheart)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 10:18 am (UTC)

Woah, powerfull story and brilliantly written. loved it.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:57 pm (UTC)
captain's bloggy

thank you so much! im so glad you liked it...YAY!

Posted by: rammstein_twood ([info]rammstein_twood)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 02:43 pm (UTC)

i liked it :D i thought it was very gripping :)
xxx

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 19th, 2009 03:57 pm (UTC)

yay! thanks! btw, ill send your fic beta'd today- sorry im late:S

Posted by: veul ([info]veul)
Posted at: June 20th, 2009 01:50 am (UTC)

Blimey. This is GORGEOUS!!! I wish it would go on... and on... and on... *shakes* sorry, bit of a reverie there.... Anyway... that fic is just so sweet! I wish Ianto wasn't always so hurt though... it hurts. ;_;... :D

But beautiful. :)

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 20th, 2009 06:20 pm (UTC)
ianto with a GUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow! i dont think ive ever had my work called gorgeous before...thank you!!!! and lol, im glad you liked it so much thatyou would want it to last- you made my day with this comment!

and i know...i shouldnt hurt ianto...but if RTD gets to do it, i think fangirls should get a chance once in a while! at least we'll take care of him and give him happy endings with lots of janto :)
thanks for reading!

Posted by: wykling ([info]wykling)
Posted at: June 26th, 2009 12:26 pm (UTC)
thoughtful tosh

*shakes head*
I don't see what's so bad about being bonkers if this story is.
LOL Aren't we all a little bonkers?
I love this idea even if it's incredibly sad for Ianto *pets him* I think you need to write some fluff for him in return.

You know it just strikes me that this whole time travelling stuff might be the reason he never returned to Ianto. Jack had meant to go back after all but with an Alice-broken TARDIS...hmmm... But ooh that would be twisted... and kind of double-heart breaking for her...

Sorry for reading so late again, stupid exams, GAAAH! *headwalls*

I just want to say again that this concept is brilliant! :D

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