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Saying 'Yes' or 'No' (1/1)- A IM Conversation Fic!

June 21st, 2008 (01:08 pm)
Can't wait for 'Turn Left' !

Where Am I?: My Bedroom.
I'm Feeling So...: Can't wait for 'Turn Left' !
On My iPod: My brother in the next room, playing with those stupid beyblades

Okay, here's a IM convo thing i did for the Torchwood team - hope you all like!!!!

Title: Saying ‘Yes’ or ‘No’ ( IM convo fic!)
 
Format: IM conversation between the team. (1/1)
 
Author: 2nd Toshiko.

Pairings/ Characters: Ianto/Jack, Owen/Tosh....very slight Ianot/Owen.
 
Rating: Good for everyone.
 
Spoilers: Slight TW S2 ‘Sleeper’ ….and KKBB…i think….
 
Disclaimer: I do not own, as much as I would like to, any of the characters or the plots of Torchwood. Or Torchwood itself. Ianto and Jack, the Torchwood team, Lisa etc are all the makings of the genius RTD and the BBC production team. So basically, they are not mine. Neither is my brain, anymore.
 
Summary: The team are bored, so they decide to IM each other, in the meantime. But what is wrong with Ianto?
 
Authors Note: Please note here that there might be bits that can be seen as Gwen bashing- I’m sorry if I offend anyone, and I would like to say I have nothing against Gwen at all. This was a very sub conscious thing- I didn’t realise there was ANY bashing until I finished. Sorry!
 
Please also note that I have interpreted that Ianto was still angry with Jack in ‘Sleeper’, and didn’t make up with Jack until that kiss in ‘Last man’. This is all just my opinion, of course.
 
Here I will also thank Dancingbarefoot, for allowing me to borrow her Ianto screen name- thanks, sweetie!!!
 
Finally, but not the least, I would like to dedicate this to Xr8fordgirl, for being as crazy as I am (it’s not a bad thing!), and for also being an incredibly encouraging and friendly person to know.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
King_Of_Weevils: (Gwen’s addy) I’m bored.
 
King_Of_Weevils:(Ianto’s addy) I’m bored.
 
King_Of_Weevils: (Toshiko’s addy) I’m bored.
 

(KING_OF_WEEVILS *NUDGES* JAPANESE_PRINCESS)

 
King_Of_Weevils: TOSH!!!!!! WAKE UP!!!!!
 
Japanese_Princess: *sighs* What?
 
Japanese_Princess: Leave me alone. Some people are decent enough to earn what they get paid.
 
King_Of_Weevils: What’s that suppose to mean? I DO do work. A lot of it, for your information.
 
Japanese_Princess: Yeah? So why aren’t you doing it now?
 
King_Of_Weevils: Haven’t got any.
 
Japanese_Princess: Yes you do. Jack just left some.
 
King_Of_Weevils: God, Tosh, nosey much?
 
Japanese_Princess: What’s nosey about knowing there’s work to do?
 
King_Of_Weevils: I will do it.Later. I’m bored Tosh!!!! Do something!!!
 
Japanese_Princess: Do work.
 
King_Of_Weevils: Nah. I’ll do it when I’m busy.
 
Japanese_Princess: Oh look, Ianto’s online!

 
( JACKSSECOND has been ADDED to the conversation)
 

Japanese_Princess: Ianto, tell Owen to work.
 
King_Of_Weevils: Stick a cork in it, Tosh.
 
Jackssecond: But he never has. Why would he start now?
 
Japanese_Princess: But, but………….
 
Jackssecond: *sighs* fine. Here.
 
King_Of_Weevils: Huh?

 
(JACKSSECOND sends King_Of_Weevils a *PUNCH*)

 
Jackssecond: GET BACK TO WORK NOW!!!!! STOP ANNOYING TOSH AND GET THAT BUTT TO THE PAPERWORK NOW!!!!!
 
King_Of_Weevils: Nice. And why would I want my butt on the paper? I thought you would want me to use my hands. Much better, trust me.
 
King_Of_Weevils: And Ouch!!!!! Stop punching me. What’s up with you?
 
Japanese_Princess: Thanks Yan, but I don’t think punchings needed yet. Are you okay?
 
Jackssecond: I’m fine.
 
King_Of_Weevils: er…….
 
Japanese_Princess: *worried*.
 
Jackssecond: I’m fine, honest, just a bit tired, no worries Tosh.
 
Japanese_Princess: Okay. If you say so.
 
King_Of_Weevils: So…..Shagged Jack yet, Ianto?
 
Japanese_Princess: OWEN!
 
King_Of_Weevils: What? Force of habit.
 
Jackssecond: What makes you think we’re shagging?
 
King_Of_Weevils: Because that’s what you do?
 
Jackssecond: No we are not. You really think I’m like that. And for the record, what I do in my time is none of your business whatsoever.
 
King_Of_Weevils: You don’t do it in your time, you do it in office time. Thanks for the record.
 
Jackssecond: Fuck off, Office slut.
 
King_Of_Weevils: Captain’s pet, picky pants.
 
Jackssecond: You-
 
Japanese_Princess: Please! No!!! Can’t you two lay off each other for two seconds.
 
King_Of_Weevils: No way I’m getting laid by him.

 
(SOON_TO_BE_WILLIAMS has been ADDED to the conversation)

 
Jackssecond: great.
 
King_Of_Weevils: ???
 
Jackssecond: Nothing.
 
Japanese_Princess: Hi Gwen!!!
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Hi Tosh!!! Hi Owen, Ianto!!! Everypne okay?
 
King_Of_Weevils: Hi Gwen. BTW, I’m really bored. Anything to do, other than work?
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: What do you expect? We’re meant to be at work. Really, what DO you expect?
 
King_Of_Weevils: A strip dance? That would be great. Up for it Tosh???
 
Japanese_Princess; NO!!!! What are you thinking???
 
King_Of_Weevils: Only a bit of fun.
 
Jackssecond: What you tend to think is fun, normally isn’t our fun, I’m afraid, Owen. Don’t worry, maybe one day your abnormalities will subside.
 
King_Of_Weevils: Close that hole in your face, Jones.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Oh yeah, Ianto!!!!! Made up with Jack yet?
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Ianto?
 
Japanese_Princess: Ianto?

King_Of_Weevils: He hasn’t….i don’t think that’s a very good subject to start right now.
 
Jackssecond: Why not? Go ahead and talk about Harkness.
 
Japanese_Princess: Can we change the subject? I’m bored too now, I’m done with work. At least one of us is.
 
King_Of_Weevils: I’ll do it later ,OKAY?? Sheez.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: oooo…I’ve got a game!!!! Anyone like the Yes/No Game?
 
King_Of_Weevils: The yes/no- fucky- WHAT?
 
Jackssecond: I love that mouth of yours.
 
King_Of_Weevils: Why thank you. It aims to please. Only, not you. Sorry.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: The yes/no game. You think of a person, and the others have to guess who you are thinking of, by asking questions, to which the person can only answer: yes or no.
 
Japanese_Princess: oooo…okay. Who’s going to start?
 
King_Of_Weevils: BORING. This sounds boring!!!
 
Soon_To_Be_Willians: You can start, since you’re so enthusiastic. Ianto, you still there?
 
Jackssecond: Barely.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: What?
 
Jackssecond: Nothing. Just ignore the teaboy.
 
King_Of_Weevils: ?????
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Are you okay??
 
Japanese_Princess: Just leave him alone. Give him some privacy, will you?
 
Jackssecond: Thank you, Toshiko.
 
Japanese_Princess: You’re welcome.
 
King_Of_Weevils: This stinks.
 
Japanese_Princess: Hurry up and choose someone, Owen!!!!
 
King_Of_Weevils: Still stinks.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Choose someone!!!!
 
King_Of_Weevils: Fine. Got it.
 
Japanese_Princess: oooo..okay….hmmm….does the person have blond hair.
 
King_Of_Weevils: No.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Brown?
 
King_Of_Weevils: Yes.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: You say something, Ianto.
 
Jackssecond: What? Oh, okay.
 
Jackssecond: Tall?
 
King_Of_Weevils; Yes, he has to be.
 
Japanese_Princess: So it’s definitely male?
 
King_Of_Weevils: Damn.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Eye colour? Brown??
 
King_Of_Weevils: Er…don't know that one.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Rhys?
 
King_Of_Weevils: Rhys is the answer to everything for you, isn’t he?
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: No!
 
Japanese_Princess: You?
 
King_Of_Weevils: No, he’s way too ugly.
 
Jackssecond: *sighs* by that I suppose you mean me?
 
King_Of_Weevils: Er….i wish I could say yes, but no.
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Who is it, then?
 
King_Of_Weevils: The bloke I can see outside my window, that’s peeing in next door’s rose bush. God that’s going to stink.
 
Japanese_Princess: OWEN!!!!
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams; OWEN!!! Choose someone we ALL know!!!!
 
King_Of_Weevils: I don’t know him.
 
Japanese_Princess: OWEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
King_Of_Weevils: Okay, okay. Gwen do someone now.
 
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Er…okay.
 
Japanese_Princess: Ianto, you still there?
 
Japanese_Princess: Ianto?
 
Jackssecond: Yes, I’m here, tosh, don’t worry.
Japanese_Princess: Okay. Good. *smiley face*.
Jackssecond: *smiley face*.
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Okay, got someone.
King_Of_Weevils: Good. Er, dark hair?
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Yes.
King_Of_Weevils: Okay. Eye colour? Brown?
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Nah.
Japanese_Princess: Green?
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Nope.
King_Of_Weevils: Purple?
Japanese_Princess: Blue?
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Yup!
Jackssecond: Oh, let me guess, this is so hard- JACK?
Japanese_Princess: Ianto?
Soon_To_Be_Williams: Yes, it is. Any problems, Ianto? 


(JACKSSECOND has LEFT the conversation)


Japanese_Princess: What’s wrong with him?
King_Of_Weevils: Just….let’s leave him. I think he’s upset.
Japanese_Princess: Since when have YOU cared about his feelings?


(UNKNOWN has been added to the conversation)


Japanese_Princess: What's that?
King_Of_Weevils: I don’t know. Maybe the computer’s are playing up.
Japanese_Princess: Great. More work for me.
King_Of_Weevils: And I don’t, okay? I just think….there are some situations when you just know you have to leave them alone. Jack’s suddenly come back, and expected him to catch on to where they left off. I don’t think it’s that easy.
Japanese_Princess: I know. I hope they get back together. Ianto was miserable when he was gone….
King_Of_Weevils: They will, don’t worry. Next thin we’ll know lover boy will be shagging him through our desks. Again.
Japanese_Princess: I guess. Can’t they use their own desks? Oh, whatever….I’m tired, I think I’ll go home.
King_Of_Weevils: Hang on….Want to go out for a drink first. I’ll pay.
Japanese_Princess: Sure, Owen. Meet you out in half an hour?
King_Of_Weevils: Yup.


(JAPANESE_PRINCESS has LEFT the conversation)


King_Of_Weevils: Bye bye, toshie.


(KING_OF_WEEVILS has LEFT the conversation)


Unknown_ID: I thought so.


(UNKNOWN_ID CLARIFIED as LOVER_BOY)


Lover_Boy: I’ll make it up to him, I will.
Lover_Boy: Miserable? He’s acting like he hates my fucking guts right now.
Lover_Boy: And he’s making me miserable. I don’t he believes me when I said I love him.
Lover_Boy: Because I do, I do, I do…



(LOVER_BOY has TERMINATED the conversation)
 
 
I'm soooo sorry for the length! So what did you think? This is my 2nd IM convo fic!!!! Good? Bad? Let me know what you think, comments are life!!!!

Comments

Posted by: thrace_adams ([info]thrace_adams)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 02:01 pm (UTC)
Jack/Ianto Won't Let Go

I thought it was cute! Well done, love the bit about Lover_Boy :) And the ending...what a great ending!

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 04:30 pm (UTC)

awww, thanks!!!! it means alot, i'm glad it was okay. i'm not always very good at this type of things, but i adore IM convo fics, so i had a try, and now i have 2 of these in my fic writing collection....

thanks for reading!

Posted by: geordie_star ([info]geordie_star)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 02:48 pm (UTC)

Awww! I love IM's and this one was really cute. Will Jack and Ianto make it up?

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)

hey, i'm glad you think its cute !!!!!1 thanks a lot for reading.....and jack and ianto always will make it up- janto forever!!!!!lol

Posted by: seether_79 ([info]seether_79)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)

Really great. I'd love another one, please :) Really enjoyed!

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 04:45 pm (UTC)

thanks!!!!i'm glad you liked this.....another? i'll make one for you, if you like....XD. i like doing IM's......

Posted by: GG is at the stage ([info]ace_of_spades6)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 04:50 pm (UTC)
Ianto/Worried

I love all these IM conversation fics, and yours was awesome! Love the pissed off!Ianto, because I really dont think he was really eager (at first) to make up with Jack...

P.S. only thing, its Clarified* ;)

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 04:57 pm (UTC)

thanks, im glad you like!!!!!! yes, ianto is cute when he is angry and im glad you agree!!!!!

yes, soory for the typo, will correct, thanks =]

Posted by: fern_knight2012 ([info]fern_knight2012)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 05:39 pm (UTC)

Oh Gwen was still logged in. Love it.

Posted by: Nicole ([info]bandgeek01)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 05:57 pm (UTC)

I had to go back and re-read that to see. I didn't catch that the first time.

Nicole

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 11:58 am (UTC)

thanks for reading!!!!!i'm soooooo glad you loved it!!!!

Posted by: Nicole ([info]bandgeek01)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 05:56 pm (UTC)

Good Job :-D

I like your IM conversations.

Nicole

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:01 pm (UTC)

*does crazy dance* yay!!!!!!thanks!!!!!i'm glad you like this- have you read my other one or something??? thanks a lot!!!!

Posted by: Jenni ([info]butterflycell)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 08:41 pm (UTC)

That was SOOOOOO cute and cool and funny and adorable.. bless him, Jack was talking to himself =]

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:02 pm (UTC)

yes, bless jack...i can imagine him talking to himself or something- i'm glad you described this fic as such- im soooo glad!!!!!1

Posted by: missthingsplace ([info]missthingsplace)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 08:45 pm (UTC)

Oh that was great :)

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:03 pm (UTC)

thanks Di!!!!!I'm glad you like it!!! coming from you, thats a great compliment!!!!!

Posted by: Jenny ([info]nyjen_nejen)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 10:59 pm (UTC)

awww poor jack and yan

Love this, well done!

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:04 pm (UTC)

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy........i'm happy you like!!!!!!

Posted by: Neyne ([info]neyne)
Posted at: June 21st, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)

the ending is just LOVE. brilliant!

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:05 pm (UTC)

love? yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......thank you!!!!!!

Posted by: Trish ([info]xr8fordgirl)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:18 am (UTC)
Torchwood Jack Ianto snog

Oooh I love it.*huggles you thankyou* Poor Ianto really isn't very happy is he and Jack said he loved him and all.

LOL who exactly is Jack talking to at the end and is there going to be any more of this, cos you know, I love your fics and this one is just wonderful.

*snickers* Owen actually has feelings and he noticed Ianto was unhappy.

*smiles happily and prints off fic*

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:08 pm (UTC)

awwwwwwwwwwww*hugs tightly* i'm glad you like- since its dedicated to you, you had to like it , or it wont be good enough!!!!!!!

jacks talking to himself, sorta...its weird i suppose...and i've been asked to write another of these, would that be a good idea? i will if you want me to.!!!!!

yes, owen has feelings...in my world anyways!!!!!

PRINTING? WOWWWWWWWW- you liked it that much??? wow *crazy dance*

Posted by: adafrog ([info]adafrog)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 03:44 am (UTC)

Cute.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:08 pm (UTC)

thanks you!!!!

Posted by: esporamor ([info]esporamor)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 05:37 am (UTC)
Janto

Lover_Boy: I’ll make it up to him, I will.
Lover_Boy: Miserable? He’s acting like he hates my fucking guts right now.
Lover_Boy: And he’s making me miserable. I don’t he believes me when I said I love him.
Lover_Boy: Because I do, I do, I do…

He does, he does, he does!

And way to go Gwen *rolls eyes* to remind him about Jack! Though I found cute her nickname.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 12:10 pm (UTC)

thank you!!!!!yes, gwen, she was a bit blunt i suppose, hehe!!!!!!

i'm glad you like that bit, coz i did try so hard to think of how to end it...thanks for reading, i really appreciate it!!!!

Posted by: Lady d'electro ([info]electrolady)
Posted at: June 22nd, 2008 09:20 pm (UTC)

awww! I love Owen calling Tosh 'toshie' after she'd left! Gotta love Owen.

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 23rd, 2008 05:04 pm (UTC)

thanks!!!! yes, i love owen !!!!!! thanks for reading!!!!

Posted by: alittlebrighter ([info]alittlebrighter)
Posted at: June 26th, 2008 09:58 am (UTC)

Great :-) love IM fics, mabye a sequal with LOVER_BOY and Jackssecond? Please? *flutters eyelashes* lol :-) thanks xxx

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: June 26th, 2008 04:44 pm (UTC)

yes, there will be a sort of squel that can be also read as a stand alone fic-......fluttering lashes always helps!!!! will be here soon!!!! thanks for reading xxx

Posted by: Siâny ([info]just_being_me08)
Posted at: July 19th, 2008 10:22 pm (UTC)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
I loved the ending! I LOVE the way tosh and owen go for a drink.
you are fabulous!!
your IM's always make me smile. this is no exception.
love just being me xxx

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: July 20th, 2008 05:03 pm (UTC)
Owen/Tosh kiss

They make you smile? YAY!!!!!!!!!! you know i love Toshiko and Owen, its proabaly my second fav slash, cant have one without the other!!!! and hey, you're fabulous for getting through all this! you have NO idea how much i appreciate it!

i hope my writing contnues to make you smile. if thats what it can do, then thats my job done well and clear.

lots of love,

2nd toshiko xxx

Posted by: Sarah ([info]yelloerainboe)
Posted at: August 16th, 2008 05:45 pm (UTC)

Aww - so nice to see Jack concerned about our Ianto for once. So he should be aswell *angry face*

Well done on IM - very true to characters

Posted by: Toshiko ([info]2nd_toshiko)
Posted at: August 16th, 2008 05:50 pm (UTC)

yes *glares at jack* he should, and he always will in my uni!!!!!!!

thanks for reading- im glad you liked this!!!! made my day :)

im glad the characterisation was okay, thats one thing that always is on my checklist!!!!!

brillant!!xD

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